Should young people follow older peoples 's example or it is good fir them to challenge older people 's opinion and thougts . Discuss both and give ur opinion .

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In the 21st era, most of young people being with different styles and thoughts. It is generally seen as lots of variation between the
olders
a person who is older than you are
elders
older
orders
and youngers, so someone feel that older people are accurately correct and
youngers
a scheming person; someone who schemes to gain an advantage
anglers
should follow them but challenging them to their opinions and thoughts, which is fairly ok to evaluate. Commonly, most of people
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
youngers
reason by deduction; establish by deduction
infers
anglers
rangers
are unfair for dwelling
this
world, they have not any sense of knowledge about their life or
carrier
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
and being as a selfish so they have to hear elder's opinions and advices for each
everythings
all things
everything
. At some home, children or adults have not
anyrights
Suggestion
any rights
either think or decide their selves.
Few years
Suggestion
A few years
ago, these might most highly right that society, but now totally different all things and ethics from
past
Suggestion
the past
.
For example
, my grandma
always scold
Suggestion
always scolds
me for my dressing. She said
me
refers to the speaker or writer
I
" Do not wear modern dresses", but ever I can not follow it
continously
at every point
continuously
. If I follow her words, I
can not
can not
cannot
mingle with my friends and society.
This
is modern and technology
generation so
Accept comma addition
generation, so
they have enough knowledge. For being correctly and happily. When we fail to challenge our past generation, we may fail to evaluate. It gives us good relationship, motivation and strength to improve while we argue, patiently with them against their sounds. In my conclusion, we must hear elders experience and advice, but if we make our own decisions, it will help us to continue perfectly our future.
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