The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the chart gives information about how many
trips
children have done to travel to and from school in two different years and in five different categories of transportation.In 1990 walking was by far the most popular way to go to school, with about 12.5 millions
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