You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am
Mr.
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Ajay Parab studying in
third
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my third
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year of
the
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college
and living in
'H'
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the 'H'
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block of
hostel
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the hostel
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. My
room
number is 'H-5', which I share with another student named
Mr.
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Raj. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that there are many problems with
this
arrangement and it's very difficult to work. I got
room
allocated
in
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this
year as a part of
senior
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hostel change policy of
college
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.
Everyday
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my
room-mate
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roommate
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come by drinking alcohol in
hostel
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room
. And
then
he
start
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making noise till late
night
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. Because of
this
I am not able to complete my sleep and couldn't concentrate on study. I got selected for
'President
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Science Project competition' from our
college
. And to complete my project I require
lot
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of concentration and research. So,
this
arrangement of
room
sharing is not benefiting me
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in any
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any way
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. I request you to give individual accommodation to me.
This
will help me to achieve success in my study and get
gold
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a gold
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medal for
college
in competition. Regards,
Mr.
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Ajay Parab

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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