You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter • Explain how you learnt about these plans • Say what you think of the park • Give your opinion on the plans

Dear Sir/Madam, The reason for writing
this
letter is to inform you about
construction
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the construction
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of
building
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a building
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at Kingsbridge
park
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Park
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.I heard about
this
plan from my morning work friend Aditya, who is an officer in
municipality
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the municipality
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office. According to him,
this
plan will start in six months.It is going to be a
twenty story
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twenty-story
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high rising building similar to surrounding buildings. The
park
is beautiful at
Present
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present
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. Kids are playing till
evening
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the evening
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after coming from school. Seniors are having morning
walk
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walks
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and yoga for fitness.There is a football court made by college students to play games during
weekend
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the weekend
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.
This
park
makes the area lively . everybody gets some greenery and peace of mind due to
park
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the park
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. In my opinion, the
park
should stick to the place
as
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a
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lot
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a lot
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of civilians depends on it for daily relaxation.As a community,we want to talk to
mayor
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the mayor
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to diminish the proposal and we need your cooperation in the process. Your’s faithfully, Manaswini
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