Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

Nowadays, with an increasing awareness of the importance of education, the past decades have seen the phenomenon that younger children were sent to the preschools.

However

, it is widely debated whether sending

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a child

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to the preschools contributed to the disadvantages.

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essay will argue that actually the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and will provide a few examples to elucidate the importance. It might be claimed that sending

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a child

the child

to the kindergartens contributed to put stress on

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children

the child

and made a few drawbacks.

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, one

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example, which

can explain that it does not make children feel

stressful but

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stressful, but

it brings lots fun to children is that when most their friends go to nursery schools they might be

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feeling

lonely.

Therefore

, sending them to nursery schools does not make them feel stressful rather than give them more opportunities to meet new friends. One

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benefit is more chances to fumble the world for young children.

For instance

, in the kindergartens, teachers lead several activities, which lets

child

to learn the new knowledge and brings fun to children,

otherwise

it might make them feel bored if they stay in their home. Through the way, children get the knowledge without efforts and stress. Another benefit is that nowadays, social skills became more important than the knowledge so that preschools are the best environment to practice social skills, since teachers can teach them and friends are the best partners to practice it.

In contrast

, staying their home not only makes them

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bored, but

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also makes

them lose the opportunities to learn social skills and to meet new friends especially for those children whose parents are busy

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work. In conclusion, based on the above reasons, it can be inferred that the advantages of sending

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to the kindergartens outweigh the disadvantages.