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Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In
thesedays
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these days
, it is simply practice for many business
meeting
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meetings
 as well as business training to occur online. There are
number
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a number
 of benefits of business meetings and
trainings
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training
 online than disadvantages. I will discuss my view of point in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. To commence with, there are numerous reasons behind that, with the help of online meetings, people can easily save a lot of time and
mony
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
many
mainly
 because they do not travel by vehicles, while through the online training, they can spend
sometime
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some time
 with their family because in
thesedays
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these days
, most of people are busy in their work and they do not spend time with their friends and relatives.
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 to, if they attend meetings
online
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online, then
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 they can reduce stress in their mind due to they do not have a tension how to explain topic
face
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 to
face
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 because most of individuals
can not
can not
cannot
 easily speak with everyone.
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, in
thesedays
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these days
, when human beings attend the meetings through the online and on that time if problem of interest connection
,
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,
 so people cannot attend their meetings and training. Even most of individuals think that,
this
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 is not real meeting and they do believe only
face
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 to
face
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 meetings and trainings
.
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.
 To conclude, according to me, online meetings and trainings are
the good
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the best
 way and there are many advantages of attend meetings online than disadvantages.

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