International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh disadvantage?

The

phomenon

any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning

phenomenon

of

globalizationin

Suggestion

globalization in

is exhibited in any part of

world

Suggestion

the world

, people like to go abroad because the price of

traspotation

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

tickets

have been decresed

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has been decreased

have been decreased

have been deceased

have been distressed

dramatically.

This

essay

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will

argured

be able to spare or give up

afford

agreed

that

desipte

regardless of, in defiance of

despite

the strain

this

mihght

expresses possibility

might

cause the

cultral

of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors

cultural

conflict, the

alliviation

the feeling that comes when something burdensome is removed or reduced

alleviation

of suffering means that the advantage far out weight the

drwback

the quality of being a hindrance

drawbacks

.

To begin

with

this

, one of

benifit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

to attracting people travel in the

country

is being

globalization

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globalized

. More

specipecfically

, tourist

take

Suggestion

takes

a trip in the

country

,

Accept space

,

and

they

of them or themselves

their

experience with difference local food, special Festival, so

traveler

a person who changes location

travellers

can

repect

a

differnent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

culture even learn

form

a giver or sender

from

it. Case in a point, in Taiwan people who want open Korean

resturants

a building where people go to eat

restaurants

restaurant

, they keen on

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to Korea in order to learn the food with local

recipt

a person who receives something

recipient

receipts

, meanwhile, whey

also

learn the way to communicate and

repect

(usually preceded by 'in') a detail or point

respect

others cultures.

Therfore

Suggestion

Therefore

, people would rather go to others

country

to learn what they

passoinate

having or expressing strong emotions

passionate

about, it

also connect

Suggestion

also connects

has also connected

closer to

eacher

a person whose occupation is teaching

teacher

from

contry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

to

contry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

county

.

Secondly

, people go abroad because

tickest

a commercial document showing that the holder is entitled to something (as to ride on public transportation or to enter a public entertainment)

tickets

became more

afforatable

that you have the financial means for

affordable

, it is only stimulate the

contry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

economic but

Suggestion

economically, but

economically but

also

broden

make broader

broaden

burden

each one knowledge and experience. For

instanst

an occurrence of something

instance

instants

instant

, people who travel in New York became more every year. Because of

this

, local

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

recived

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

extra income from tourism, so

goverment

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the government

government

have

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has

fund

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funded

beautifucation

the act of making something more beautiful

beautification

public

bulding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

bidding

and maintaneces construction

Suggestion

construction and maintenance

and maintenance construction

. In short, it is win win situation since the

country

own

profitm

the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)

profit

profit m

profits

and tourist

also

enjoy their journal. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

totoally

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

totally

agreee

be in accord; be in agreement

agree

agreed

with

contry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

opening their door to attract

more toursit

Suggestion

more tourism

more tourist

more toast

. That's the fact that males and females have more opportunity

understan

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

a diversity culture and

country

.

Therefore

, it is absolutely

benifit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

more than drawback factor. In the future,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

sincerely wish that states can

focuse

the concentration of attention or energy on something

focus

on

travling

a long fishing line with many shorter lines and hooks attached to it (usually suspended between buoys)

trawling

troubling

travelling

development,

goverment

Suggestion

the government

government

not only welcome

peple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

to travel

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travel

to differ

contry but

Accept comma addition

country, but

country but

countries but

county but

also

encourge

contribute to the progress or growth of

encourage

encourages

people to go abroad, so people will know how to respect and learn

from

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about

difference

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different

culture.