International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh disadvantage?
The
phomenon
of any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
globalizationin
is exhibited in any part of Suggestion
globalization in
world
, people like to go abroad because the price of Suggestion
the world
traspotation
tickets a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
have been decresed
dramatically. Suggestion
has been decreased
have been decreased
have been deceased
have been distressed
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essay Linking Words
i
will refers to the speaker or writer
I
argured
that be able to spare or give up
afford
agreed
desipte
the strain regardless of, in defiance of
despite
this
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mihght
cause the expresses possibility
might
cultral
conflict, the of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
alliviation
of suffering means that the advantage far out weight the the feeling that comes when something burdensome is removed or reduced
alleviation
drwback
.
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
To begin
with Linking Words
this
, one of Linking Words
benifit
to attracting people travel in the financial assistance in time of need
benefit
country
is being Use synonyms
globalization
. More Suggestion
globalized
specipecfically
, tourist Suggestion
take
a trip in the Suggestion
takes
country
Use synonyms
,
and Accept space
,
they
experience with difference local food, special Festival, so of them or themselves
their
traveler
can a person who changes location
travellers
repect
a Suggestion
differnent
culture even learn unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
form
it. Case in a point, in Taiwan people who want open Korean a giver or sender
from
resturants
, they keen on a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
traveling
to Korea in order to learn the food with local the act of going from one place to another
travelling
recipt
, meanwhile, whey a person who receives something
recipient
receipts
also
learn the way to communicate and Linking Words
repect
others cultures. (usually preceded by 'in') a detail or point
respect
Therfore
, people would rather go to others Suggestion
Therefore
country
to learn what they Use synonyms
passoinate
about, it having or expressing strong emotions
passionate
Linking Words
also connect
closer to Suggestion
also connects
has also connected
eacher
from a person whose occupation is teaching
teacher
Use synonyms
contry
to a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
Use synonyms
contry
.
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
county
Secondly
, people go abroad because Linking Words
tickest
became more a commercial document showing that the holder is entitled to something (as to ride on public transportation or to enter a public entertainment)
tickets
afforatable
, it is only stimulate the that you have the financial means for
affordable
Use synonyms
contry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
economic but
Suggestion
economically, but
economically but
also
Linking Words
broden
each one knowledge and experience. For make broader
broaden
burden
instanst
, people who travel in New York became more every year. Because of an occurrence of something
instance
instants
instant
this
, local Linking Words
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
recived
extra income from tourism, so conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
goverment
Suggestion
the government
government
have
Suggestion
has
fund
Suggestion
funded
beautifucation
public the act of making something more beautiful
beautification
bulding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
bidding
and maintaneces construction
. In short, it is win win situation since the Suggestion
construction and maintenance
and maintenance construction
country
own Use synonyms
profitm
and tourist the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
profit
profit m
profits
also
enjoy their journal.
In conclusion, Linking Words
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totoally
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
totally
agreee
with be in accord; be in agreement
agree
agreed
Use synonyms
contry
opening their door to attract a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
more toursit
. That's the fact that males and females have more opportunity Suggestion
more tourism
more tourist
more toast
understan
a diversity culture and know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
country
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is absolutely Linking Words
benifit
more than drawback factor. In the future, financial assistance in time of need
benefit
i
sincerely wish that states can refers to the speaker or writer
I
focuse
on the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
travling
development, a long fishing line with many shorter lines and hooks attached to it (usually suspended between buoys)
trawling
troubling
travelling
goverment
not only welcome Suggestion
the government
government
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
to travel
to differ Suggestion
travel
Use synonyms
contry but
Accept comma addition
country, but
country but
countries but
county but
also
Linking Words
encourge
people to go abroad, so people will know how to respect and learn contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
encourages
from
Suggestion
about
difference
culture.Suggestion
different
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