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Giving lectures in halls to large numbers of people is an outdated method of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Due to technology advance, traditional teaching methods have been gradually replaced by online teaching style. There is no doubt that people obtain any diffe
ren
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
t kinds of information easily on the
internet
 and it brings us much flexible learning time and no retricted
location
subject to restriction or subjected to restriction
restricted
 issue;
therefore
, I strongly agree that by using online has many positive benefits for us.
First
 of all, the most significant change from lecture at school to online courses is that students and people who wants to improve working skills are able to self- study without time limited. To do so, a lot of people can study during the morning before work or midnight after work because we have access to the
internet
 with 24 hours. What is more, when students finish their course if they want to review the content again, it is possible to do it on the
internet
 several times. Another positive things fo
r stud
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ying online is to solve the education problem of rural
ar
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in
eas.
For example
, students who live in poor countris
or lack
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
controls
of educational organizations are likely to learn knowledge by utilizing the
internet
. In additional, the number of people have been carrying on sharing free infornati
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a message received and understood
information
theref
or
Accept space
;
e, it helps us to cost less money to study. In conclusion,
internet
brings s
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the internet
o many conventen
t things t
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
o our society,
such
 as 24 hours flixible
learning
capable of being changed
flexible
 time and no destination issue.
However
, on balance, I wholly believe that it is a trend to learn online courses today comparing with the past.

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