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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowdays
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Nowadays
, people are watching different types of shows in the
telivision
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
.
some
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Some
 type of the shows
are containg
Suggestion
is continuing
are continuing
are content
 violence and
also
 harmful
for
Suggestion
to
 the children and they provide impact on children's behaviour.I
am strongly agree
Suggestion
strongly agree
 with
this
 statement seeing augment amount. Of shows that
contaning
include or contain; have as a component
contain
continuing
 violence on
telivision
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
 and put the bad impact on children's behaviour.
Firstly
, in
this
morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
 time some shows
contaning
include or contain; have as a component
containing
contain
 huge fight scenes that
also
 put
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impect
the striking of one body against another
impact
impacts
 on the
children
Suggestion
children's
child's
child
 behaviour while some children seeing that shows that memory continues thinking
this things
Suggestion
these things
this thing
 and trying to do
this
 and
that is
 detrimental
impect
the striking of one body against another
impact
impacts
 on
tha
definite article
the
childrens
Suggestion
children's
children
habit
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habitual
.
in
Suggestion
In
addition that
Accept comma addition
addition, that
 some shows are providing children
knowledge but
Accept comma addition
knowledge, but
 others bad one is put the children
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impect
the striking of one body against another
impact
impacts
.
On the other hand
, continusioly watching the telivison to harmful for the children eye and
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