Write about the following topic: As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

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In the developing countries the size of the family is becoming less than other undeveloped countries. There are arguments on

this

however

, we will discuss here. A myriad of people think that it is happening

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

development

Suggestion

the development

of the country.

However

this

is happening because of the thoughts of parents. These days most of the youngs want to live without marriage and do not want to get any children. On the one

hand

Accept comma addition

hand, this

this

is the biggest reason of that, to my mind. But

on the other hand

, it might be said that

this

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

of air pollution.

This

might affect on young people's health and

this

is leading to a phobia to be

parent

Suggestion

parents

Finally

cause

Suggestion

the cause

of that

problem

might be that the government are

attening

the process whereby a person concentrates on some features of the environment to the (relative) exclusion of others

attending

less attention for families.

Insted they

Accept comma addition

Instead, they

Instead they

are paying much of their attention on the appearance of their city. Everything

migh be look

Suggestion

might look

might be look

might be looked

may be look

like going right.

However

this

might mostly show its influence in the future. The population who

live

Suggestion

lives

in that kind of country might not affect from

this but

Accept comma addition

this, but

the government

get

Suggestion

gets

worst after

sveral

(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many

several

decades. If they do not pay as more attention as they can in the

future it

Accept comma addition

future, it

might cost an arm and a leg as well as they might spend big bucks to deal with

this

problem

. The biggest

problem

that comes from that might be decreasing of the number of humanity and becoming disappeared after

milleniums

a span of 1000 years

millennium

. I pen down by saying that if the

problem

would not be

dealed

act on verbally or in some form of artistic expression

dealt

with right now, in the future our world might be controlled by robots or other kind of creatures.

Fri Jan 10 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

272 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Write about the following topic: As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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