Write about the following topic: As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

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In the developing countries the size of the family is becoming less than other undeveloped countries. There are arguments on
this
,
however
, we will discuss here. A myriad of people think that it is happening
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of
development
Suggestion
the development
of the country.
However
,
this
is happening because of the thoughts of parents. These days most of the youngs want to live without marriage and do not want to get any children. On the one
hand
Accept comma addition
hand, this
this
is the biggest reason of that, to my mind. But
on the other hand
, it might be said that
this
is
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of air pollution.
This
might affect on young people's health and
this
is leading to a phobia to be
parent
Suggestion
parents
.
Finally
,
cause
Suggestion
the cause
of that
problem
might be that the government are
attening
the process whereby a person concentrates on some features of the environment to the (relative) exclusion of others
attending
less attention for families.
Insted they
Accept comma addition
Instead, they
Instead they
are paying much of their attention on the appearance of their city. Everything
migh be look
Suggestion
might look
might be look
might be looked
may be look
like going right.
However
,
this
might mostly show its influence in the future. The population who
live
Suggestion
lives
in that kind of country might not affect from
this but
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this, but
the government
get
Suggestion
gets
worst after
sveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
decades. If they do not pay as more attention as they can in the
future it
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future, it
might cost an arm and a leg as well as they might spend big bucks to deal with
this
problem
. The biggest
problem
that comes from that might be decreasing of the number of humanity and becoming disappeared after
milleniums
a span of 1000 years
millennium
. I pen down by saying that if the
problem
would not be
dealed
act on verbally or in some form of artistic expression
dealt
with right now, in the future our world might be controlled by robots or other kind of creatures.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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