Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: ask questions about the trip tell them why you want to join the group explain how you can help

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to enquire about the United States tour, which school has planned for children and parents.
Also
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I would like to express my interest in joining
this
trip
and to offer my help for any admin related work
require
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during the
trip
. I wonder if you could help me with duration and if any planned activity, so that I can prepare myself for
this
wonderful
trip
. I have seen on the internet it would be mostly rainy all the time, so I would like to know if you could provide us
umbrella
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or rainy clothes or I have to shop
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for it
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it
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them
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from the market. I was always excited to visit the United States, though due to some work engagement I was not able to make
plan
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for
this
. so I would be more than happy to join
school
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trip
with my kids.
Also
, I have done volunteering
to
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so many trips organised by our office, so I am excited if
i
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get something to work
in
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on
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your
trip
. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Aman Kansal

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