Your child's school is going for a trip out of the country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group. Write a letter to school. In your letter, you should: ask questions about the trip tell them why you want to join the group explain how you can help
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to enquire about the United States tour, which school has planned for children and parents. Also
I would like to express my interest in joining Add a comma
,Also
this
trip
and to offer my help for any admin related work require
during the Change the form of the verb
required
trip
.
I wonder if you could help me with duration and if any planned activity, so that I can prepare myself for this
wonderful trip
. I have seen on the internet it would be mostly rainy all the time, so I would like to know if you could provide us umbrella
or rainy clothes or I have to shop Change preposition
with umbrella
Change preposition
for it
it
from the market.
I was always excited to visit the United States, though due to some work engagement I was not able to make Correct pronoun usage
them
plan
for Add an article
a plan
this
. so I would be more than happy to join school
Correct article usage
a school
trip
with my kids.
Also
, I have done volunteering to
so many trips organised by our office, so I am excited if Change preposition
on
i
get something to work Change the capitalization
I
in
your Change preposition
on
trip
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite