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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that?

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The
number
 of men who are employed
at
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in
 the higher positions in companies is much higher than the
number
 of women. Some people believe that governments must oblige companies to hire more women rather than more men, while others argue that men are capable to do the high-level jobs in
high
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higher
 efficiency rather than women.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why companies should employ an equal
number
 of men and women regardless the type of the task. Companies must hire an equal
number
 of men and women in their high-level jobs because nowadays the universities have been graduated an equal
number
 of males and females. Governments must compile companies to hire an equal
number
 of men and women since they have equal rights.
For example
, in the USA, 90% of American companies have hired an equal
number
 from both sexes in most of the sectors in 2010.
Therefore
, due to
increasing
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the increasing number
an increasing number
number
 of females who have graduated from post-secondary schools, governments must encourage companies to hire more women.
On the other hand
, some people think that men have leadership skills which enable him to lead
companies greater than
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companies with greater than
 women. Most women don't interest about their jobs after they got married.
For example
, recent research which has conducted in the USA has shown that women after getting married, they prefer looking after their homes rather than their jobs. But these people are unaware of the fact that nowadays most women have
stop
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stopped
 thinking of getting married.
Thus
, increasing the
number
 of jobs for women is necessary, and the governments have to
compile
force somebody to do something
compel
 companies to hire more women. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed the reason why governments have to legislate some rules to
compile
force somebody to do something
compel
 companies to hire more women. In my opinion, I believe that women shall the rights for working at any position
inside
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in
 the companies, and they have equal rights as men.

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