Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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of all I would like to define that what is
crime
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a crime
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Who anyone
do
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does
something against the society rule or law that activity is coming under the
crime
.
Crime
should be get punishable. The criminals may be booked
for
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in
jail or
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
punishment as per the
countries
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country
court orders. No
one
can hide
crime
for a long time because
one
day true must reveal. We can check through any of the religious books like
bible
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the bible
, Quran,
gita
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Gita
get
all books
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say
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getting
success at the end. Now I compare with the
years that’s
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years, that’s
gone
now a days
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now a day, crime
now a day crime
nowadays crime
crime
rate
is so decreased. Research and day-to-day news proving
crime
rate
is too less now compare
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are too less now comparing
now too less compare
are too less now compared
have too less now compared
is too less now compare
than previous years.
the
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The
reason what I told the
crime
rate
is decreased because now a days
technology
is growing faster. Now these days where ever we go
,
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,
anywhere we can see the
CCTV
. The
CCTV
is the main
technology
cause the diminish of
crime
rate
.
because
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Because
CCTV
eyes working 24 hours
with out
in absence of
without
the rest.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
anyone
try
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tries
to
do
engage in
make
someone like
crime
that should be recorded in the
CCTV
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A lot
of cases got closed through
CCTV
check. Now these days
CCTV
is the main depend
of
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on
the
police
force.
police made
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Police made a
Police made
success in their investigation through
CCTV
evidence. For
one
example I can explore here to prove it. It
happend
come to pass
happened
in my state Kerala. The
police
caught a big group who stolen money from the
ATM
counter. The thieves who stolen the
ATM
was very brave. Because they
distroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
the
ATM
camera
firstly
the they did that.
but
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But
our
police
force was very brave more than thieves.
Police
did a
deep
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deeper
investigation in
this
case. They
gone
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have gone
are gone
went
all shops beside the
ATM
counter and check the footage while the stolen
happend
come to pass
happened
time
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him
.
they
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They
find out his address and raised a warrant against him.
Then
he arrested after
questioned
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questioning
him
,
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,
he revealed all the
trues
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trees, then
trees then
then
police
arrested
rest
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the rest
of the group accused from the railway station. In order to the report come out the National daily proves
crime
rate
is too Less now because the
technology
advancements.The National leading daily reported, in 1870’s
crime
rate
were too
horrible but
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horrible, but
now in
20’s that’s
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20’s, that’s
getting
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got
something less due to
technology
upgrading. 
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of
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a
an
fun
mercy crimes happening now these days.
Nirbhaya
,
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,
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reddy
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Reddy
cruelty like like. In my opinion,
CCTV
is the best tool to reduce
crime
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the crime rate
rate
.
Police
and experts in criminology
says
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say
CCTV
is useful to decrease
crime
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
Government
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the Government
must do something for making
CCTV
surveillance.

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