Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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First

of all I would like to define that what is

crime

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a crime

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Who anyone

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does

something against the society rule or law that activity is coming under the

crime

Crime

should be get punishable. The criminals may be booked

for

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jail or

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

punishment as per the

countries

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country

court orders. No

one

can hide

crime

for a long time because

one

day true must reveal. We can check through any of the religious books like

bible

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the bible

, Quran,

gita

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Gita

get

all books

says

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say

true will be

get

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getting

success at the end. Now I compare with the

years that’s

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years, that’s

gone

now a days

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now a day, crime

now a day crime

nowadays crime

crime

rate

is so decreased. Research and day-to-day news proving

crime

rate

is too less now compare

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are too less now comparing

now too less compare

are too less now compared

have too less now compared

is too less now compare

than previous years.

the

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The

reason what I told the

crime

rate

is decreased because now a days

technology

is growing faster. Now these days where ever we go

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anywhere we can see the

CCTV

. The

CCTV

is the main

technology

cause the diminish of

crime

rate

because

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Because

CCTV

eyes working 24 hours

with out

in absence of

without

the rest.

to a very great extent or degree

anyone

try

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tries

engage in

make

someone like

crime

that should be recorded in the

CCTV

Lot

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A lot

of cases got closed through

CCTV

check. Now these days

CCTV

is the main depend

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the

police

force.

police made

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Police made a

Police made

success in their investigation through

CCTV

evidence. For

one

example I can explore here to prove it. It

happend

come to pass

happened

in my state Kerala. The

police

caught a big group who stolen money from the

ATM

counter. The thieves who stolen the

ATM

was very brave. Because they

distroy

do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of

destroy

the

ATM

camera

firstly

the they did that.

but

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But

our

police

force was very brave more than thieves.

Police

did a

deep

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deeper

investigation in

this

case. They

gone

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have gone

are gone

went

all shops beside the

ATM

counter and check the footage while the stolen

happend

come to pass

happened

time

a (usually) large and scholarly book

tome

. After they got the

one

victim face cleanly

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

they pass out the accused face to all investigation spot in India. At

last

the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree

least

they got

his

that male; objective male pronoun

him

they

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They

find out his address and raised a warrant against him.

Then

he arrested after

questioned

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questioning

him

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he revealed all the

trues

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trees, then

trees then

then

police

arrested

rest

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the rest

of the group accused from the railway station. In order to the report come out the National daily proves

crime

rate

is too Less now because the

technology

advancements.The National leading daily reported, in 1870’s

crime

rate

were too

horrible but

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horrible, but

now in

20’s that’s

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20’s, that’s

getting

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got

something less due to

technology

upgrading.

Even lot

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The Even lot

An Even lot

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fun

mercy crimes happening now these days.

Nirbhaya

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Priyanka

reddy

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Reddy

cruelty like like. In my opinion,

CCTV

is the best tool to reduce

crime

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the crime rate

rate

Police

and experts in criminology

says

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say

CCTV

is useful to decrease

crime

to a very great extent or degree

Government

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the Government

must do something for making

CCTV

surveillance.

Fri Jan 10 2020

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