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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill should be made a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

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In decades, the major constituents of
education
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 were reading
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writing and maths. Due to the improvisation of computers recently there has been a thought in people’s mind that the
computer
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skill
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 should
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 be included into the list.
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,
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 I strongly believe and agree with the thought of making
computer
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skill
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 as one of the basic skills of
education
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.
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Computer
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 skills are likely to be more helpful for the people in maintaining their business and
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 to that it has become a part of our basic need. We use
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computer
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computers
the computer
a computer
 for everything in our day to day life. So, it’s unequivocally important for people to learn how to use the thinking machine and what are all the quests which they can accomplish with the help of the
computer
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 in their daily life.
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, the schools and primary
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education firms
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education, firms
 should
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 encourage the students to enrol themselves to the software based courses.
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, they learn the basics and they would
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 get a knowledge about the efficiency of
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 intelligent machine
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 It eventually moulds them to face the modern and fast moving world and the students would
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 cope up with the competitive environment
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 There
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 a plethora of applications of
computer
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 in the modern globe. The ultimate aim of including the
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software, skill
skill
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 as one of the basic skills is to inculcate variety of thoughts and innovations in the minds of the students. Sooner they would come up with a revolutionary idea to develop their surrounding and to make it a better place for people to live in. To conclude, making
computer
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skill
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 one of the basic skills of
education
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 is something which everyone in the world should encourage.
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 will in-turn make the splintering world legit
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, it will defuse the workforce from the labours and ease their work.

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