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IN NUMBER OF COUNTRIES SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS NECESSRARY TO SPEND LARGE SUMS OF MONEY ON CONSTRUCTION NEW RAILWAY LINES FOR VERY FAST TRAINS BETWEEN CITIES.OTHERS BELIEVE THE MONEY SHOULD BE SPEND ON IMPROVING PUBLIC TRANSPORT. GIVE YOUR OPNION

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Transportation
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The transportation system
A transportation system
system
 is considered as the lifeline for any country
.
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.
you
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You
cant
can not
can't
 imagine success without
good transtport
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a good transport system
good transport system
system
.
some
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Some
 believe that government should spend
money on building of
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money on building
 new railway tracks and some believe that they should do more work on public transport.
in
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In
 my essay I will discuss both aspects and explain my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
 as well. In modern world of
technology transportation
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technology, transportation
system
 has been improved and
fast as
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fast, as
 compared to
past
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the past
.
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.
Modren
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
Modern
 trains take
passanger
a traveler riding in a vehicle (a boat or bus or car or plane or train etc) who is not operating it
passengers
 from one place to another in
short time
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a short time
 and without traffic congestion.Many countries are building underground
metrostations
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metro stations
 and bullet
train
 tracks just to make travelling
more easier
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easier
.
trains
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Trains
 can take
lot
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lots
 of people and luggage at
same time
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the same time
.
trains
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Trains
 can connect rural and urban areas.
good
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The good train system
Good train system
train
system
boast
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boasts
economy
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an economy
 of a country
.
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.
Another most important aspect of
this
train
system
 is it help to reduce pollution.
becacuse
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Because
Becacuse
 more people travel by
train
 and there will be lesser cars on the road.
However
, in countries like
Pakistan where
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Pakistan, where
 railway
system
 is very poor and based on old tracks and locomotives.They need
huge budget
Suggestion
a huge budget
 to develop new tracks so government should spend money on public transport and
infra structure
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
 of roads as well.Recently a metro bus service is introduced between Islamabad and Rawalpindi
this
 is very comfortable and economical way of travelling
.
Accept space
.
 I conclude my essay on
this
 point that
,
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,
government
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the government
need
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needs
 proper policies to spend money on
transport
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the transport system
transport systems
system
 and railways
.
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.
we
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We
 cannot ignore
importance
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the importance
 of railways to improve
economy
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the economy
 of a country.
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