IN NUMBER OF COUNTRIES SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS NECESSRARY TO SPEND LARGE SUMS OF MONEY ON CONSTRUCTION NEW RAILWAY LINES FOR VERY FAST TRAINS BETWEEN CITIES.OTHERS BELIEVE THE MONEY SHOULD BE SPEND ON IMPROVING PUBLIC TRANSPORT. GIVE YOUR OPNION

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Transportation

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The transportation system

A transportation system

system

is considered as the lifeline for any country

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you

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You

cant

can not

can't

imagine success without

good transtport

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a good transport system

good transport system

system

some

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Some

believe that government should spend

money on building of

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money on building

new railway tracks and some believe that they should do more work on public transport.

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my essay I will discuss both aspects and explain my

opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

opinions

as well. In modern world of

technology transportation

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technology, transportation

system

has been improved and

fast as

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fast, as

compared to

past

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the past

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Modren

used of a living language; being the current stage in its development

Modern

trains take

passanger

a traveler riding in a vehicle (a boat or bus or car or plane or train etc) who is not operating it

passengers

from one place to another in

short time

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a short time

and without traffic congestion.Many countries are building underground

metrostations

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metro stations

and bullet

train

tracks just to make travelling

more easier

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easier

trains

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Trains

can take

lot

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lots

of people and luggage at

same time

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the same time

trains

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Trains

can connect rural and urban areas.

good

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The good train system

Good train system

train

system

boast

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boasts

economy

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an economy

of a country

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Another most important aspect of

this

train

system

is it help to reduce pollution.

becacuse

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Because

Becacuse

more people travel by

train

and there will be lesser cars on the road.

However

, in countries like

Pakistan where

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Pakistan, where

railway

system

is very poor and based on old tracks and locomotives.They need

huge budget

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a huge budget

to develop new tracks so government should spend money on public transport and

infra structure

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

infrastructure

of roads as well.Recently a metro bus service is introduced between Islamabad and Rawalpindi

this

is very comfortable and economical way of travelling

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I conclude my essay on

this

point that

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government

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the government

need

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needs

proper policies to spend money on

transport

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the transport system

transport systems

system

and railways

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cannot ignore

importance

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the importance

of railways to improve

economy

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the economy

of a country.

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IN NUMBER OF COUNTRIES SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS NECESSRARY TO SPEND LARGE SUMS OF MONEY ON CONSTRUCTION NEW RAILWAY LINES FOR VERY FAST TRAINS BETWEEN CITIES.OTHERS BELIEVE THE MONEY SHOULD BE SPEND ON IMPROVING PUBLIC TRANSPORT. GIVE YOUR OPNION

Fully explain your ideas

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