Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology has developed a lot in 20the
centry
a period of 100 years
century
. Due to
this
automation, we can see advantages, as the world is transformed into Global village. The
use
of mobile phones, laptops, and every technology has made our life so easy. We can talk to any person around the globe. We can see our loved ones by just pressing a single click through our
cellphones
Suggestion
cell phones
. GPs
refers
Suggestion
referring
refer
to Global Positioning System, has innovated and opened the gateways to new machinery. It has revolutionized our
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
.
For example
, we can
use
GPs to track the location of our children through phones. We can send our current location if we get lost on our way to home. Mothers can check the babysitter, what is she
doig
engage in
doing
to her baby, tracking cameras on the roads check the mobility of
suspecious
openly distrustful and unwilling to confide
suspicious
people on the streets. By the security cameras life has become easy to monitor your loved ones. But everything which has advantages has
also
disadvantages. While downloading an application on your mobile, you agree the terms and conditions, and most of the conditions
also
ask for the tracking of current position and photo access. By accepting terms, we let anyone chase our privacy, which can be misused at any place. It has been reported, in some countries, there were found some hidden security cameras which captured nude pictures of women in the changing rooms, shows explicit
use
of technology. So everything has uses and misuses, for
this
purpose there must be limitations of robotics under
use
,
wether
introduces two alternatives
whether
it comes to technology, mobile phones, and security cameras. Before buying or downloading any application, make sure it
,
Accept space
,
s
the syllable naming the fifth (dominant) note of any musical scale in solmization
so
use
, the agreement must be properly read,
gps
Suggestion
GPs
location must be turned off most of the time.
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