Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lesson pressure on worlds fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is a diet for cars, buses, trains, aeroplanes and boats which requires on a daily basis. Some offenders believe that to decrease world

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consumption

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consumption, fuel

fuel

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prices should be increased

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the price of petrol is useless because there are some alternatives that can be helpful for reducing

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consumption

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can be one of the best

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to reduce world usage, these will make people think twice whether to use their personal vehicle

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be analysed before taking

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decisions. Price of petrol will overall inflation.

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will result in a skewed supply chain relationship of petrol as a commodity. There are other alternatives that the government could explore to curb in

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consumption

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consumed vehicles are restricted in cities in result, these will create less pollution as well as traffic issues will

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be solved.

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, national council must research on other sources of

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or more focus should be done on electric cars in term, which will not harm the environment and

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be reduced. To sum up, hike in

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price will reduce somewhat of

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, government must explore other alternatives which indeed not harm nature and the natural resources will

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be less consumed.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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