In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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Industrialization has led to the boom in human migration towards the locations where people can find work and flourish.

This

attraction towards quality of life has resulted in demands of

colonies

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the colonies

and houses, which is indispensable to people for

living

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a living

. As we think about metro cities, land availability for the construction is the biggest challenge. Population and commercialization have now

foster

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fostered

to develop the outskirts of these cities, where townships are constructed and people with

few hours

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a few hours

of travelling can reach their destination. Recently, my parents decided to shift into my city and stay closer to me, they find a hard time to get a house in the main area and

lastly

they took their home in the countryside only.

This

development of horizons is required as with a shorter distance to your workplace, family and friends and other necessities, one can cover them all.

However

, the

rises

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rise

rising

in homes

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outer areas are

also

destructing the environment as well. We are constantly viewing in

media

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the media

, how some of the non-government organizations (NGOs) are coming forward to oppose

such

developments as

that is

impacting the natural habitat of the local communities and flora and fauna of those areas. To recapitulate,

government

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the government

should come forward with some policies and programs where

environment

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the environment

and colonization of humans can be

manage

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managed

in a balanced way. And

also

as a part of the community, we as a human should

also

take some actions like living together and ending the culture of unit families. Buildings with

multistoried

to be promoted rather than bungalow or houses which requires their individual space.

Such

small and big steps can aid in the two said situations go hand in hand.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urbanization
Ecological benefits
Biodiversity conservation
Carbon sequestration
Sustainable development
Eco-friendly building materials
Green architecture
Government policies
Urban sprawl
Infrastructure
Smart planning
Agricultural lands
Rural areas
Population growth
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

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