Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places ?

#tourists #places #conditions #sahara #desert #antarctic #visit

Now a days, in most of the

cases people

Accept comma addition

cases, people

like adventure and

consequently

they plan a tour to visit places full of risks. There are several places where these people like to travel

such

Antarctic

Suggestion

the Antarctic

region, Mount

everest

a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)

Everest

and so on. It is observed that people

feels

Suggestion

feel

motivated after completing

such

adveturous

willing to undertake or seeking out new and daring enterprises

adventurous

journey and it will help them at some point in life. There are various advantages as well as drawbacks for

such

destinations with full of adventure.

First

, let's talk about the positive aspects of it. People who

plans

Suggestion

plan

are planning

such

a trip gain good knowledge on how to survive in extreme conditions.

For example

, if someone starts trekking on Mount Everent, oxygen level reduces rapidly after a certain distance and

as a result

it becomes difficult to breathe. So, it is indispensable for every individual to carry an oxygen cylinder at their back in these types of journey which is another advantage where people learn to carry a heavy substance at their back in case of emergencies. Visiting

such

places

also

ensures discovery of any ancient material which nobody found earlier. There are several disadvantages as well if someone visit a place full of challenges. They risk their life in order to achieve something. There might be a danger of any hidden animal which is not familiar to the world and since nobody

know

Suggestion

knows

how to handle

such

creatures, it becomes difficult to handle them. There could

also

be a possibility of a natural disaster like

snow storm

Suggestion

a snow storm

in places like Himalayan ranges that could take someones life as it is difficult to escape through it. There are some places whose routes are not well defined and it becomes difficult to track them.

This

is turn can lead to an unexpected location and might become difficult to return. To Conclude, everyone should be well prepared and take

good training

Suggestion

a good training

before

staring

a turn to be a starter (in a game at the beginning)

starting

their journey to

such

places.

Also

, a good study is expected in order to understand the place of visit. And it's important to always carry a map while travelling to places where people rarely travel.

This

is to ensure a safe and wonderful trip with full of good memories and learnings.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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personal growth
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harsh weather
difficult terrain
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