Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Media is the fastest mode of communication, It brings news to the hall of everyone’s home. Now it is identified
trend
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trends
that the media is telecasting the problem people faces in day-to-day life over the benefits what they really experience in
present
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the present
. I partially agree
with that the media
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with the media that
is play
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are playing
a
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an
anti-role. In
this
essay I will discuss the negativity of the media and
then
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will take you to the positive point. People in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
are more curious to hear about the gossip and negative side of a person rather than amazing half of
others
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the others
.
This
is the key for the media to telecast the problems over the development, so whomever telecasting negative news
are getting
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is getting
unimaginable rating than vice versa. TRP rating is
measure
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measured
which clearly shows
this ideas
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these ideas
this idea
. Telecasting negative news
such
as racism creates impact in every individual and among the concern society peoples.
This
is very bad impress
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is very bad impressing
has very bad impressed
is very bad impressed
impresses very bad
is very bad impress
about media among the
peoples
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people's
subconcious
just below the level of consciousness
subconscious
mind. In
this
passage,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will bring the advantageous side of the negative news telecasting. People are able to receive the concerns directly so that it is making easy to question the
authories
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
authors
author's
for the improvement of the problem what they are facing in their region. To
summaries
give a summary (of)
summarize
it, I am partially
agrees
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agreeing
that the media is telecasting the evil over the angel, whereas they need to improve to build confidence in the
viewers
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viewer's
mind about the media.
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  • pessimistic outlook
  • exposed to negative news
  • stress and anxiety
  • success stories
  • balanced reporting
  • well-informed public
  • rational decisions
  • sense of helplessness
  • apathy
  • skew public perception
  • mistrust in institutions
  • enhance well-being
  • mental health
  • manipulate public opinion
  • serve specific agendas
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