Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Media is the fastest mode of communication, It brings news to the hall of everyone’s home. Now it is identified

trend

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trends

that the media is telecasting the problem people faces in day-to-day life over the benefits what they really experience in

present

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the present

. I partially agree

with that the media

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with the media that

is play

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are playing

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anti-role. In

this

essay I will discuss the negativity of the media and

then

refers to the speaker or writer

will take you to the positive point. People in

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

are more curious to hear about the gossip and negative side of a person rather than amazing half of

others

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the others

This

is the key for the media to telecast the problems over the development, so whomever telecasting negative news

are getting

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is getting

unimaginable rating than vice versa. TRP rating is

measure

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measured

which clearly shows

this ideas

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these ideas

this idea

. Telecasting negative news

such

as racism creates impact in every individual and among the concern society peoples.

This

is very bad impress

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is very bad impressing

has very bad impressed

is very bad impressed

impresses very bad

is very bad impress

about media among the

peoples

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people's

subconcious

just below the level of consciousness

subconscious

mind. In

this

passage,

refers to the speaker or writer

will bring the advantageous side of the negative news telecasting. People are able to receive the concerns directly so that it is making easy to question the

authories

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

authorities

authors

author's

for the improvement of the problem what they are facing in their region. To

summaries

give a summary (of)

summarize

it, I am partially

agrees

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agreeing

that the media is telecasting the evil over the angel, whereas they need to improve to build confidence in the

viewers

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viewer's

mind about the media.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages

Write about the following topic. Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

-Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.