Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

There is no question that, at present, environmental problems are a hot topic in many conversations. There is debate as to which is a more urgent problem,
loss
of
species
or, other environmental problems. I believe these two arguments are intrinsically linked and should be understood together rather than viewed independently. The
decline
and extinction of a
species
is an endemic issue throughout the recorded history of mankind. The importance of a singular group of animals or plants may not seem significant until, their
roll
the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group
role
in the greater ecosystem is known. The
loss
of a link in the chain of the ecosystem can cause an imbalance in the entire
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
resulting in additional pressure being put on other
species
that can result in their
decline
. There are many institutions and charities in place to protect at risk living
organisms even
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organisms, even
though
more benefit
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the more benefit
could be gained by protecting before the
species
is at risk.
Moreover
, understanding what is causing the
loss
of a
species
can help prevent it occurring in the
first
place. These environmental issues include global warming, deforestation and pollution, unless these problems are addressed there will be a continual
decline
in the viability of
this
planet for all flora and fauna. The impact of these factors
are
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is
primarily at fault of mankind and they impact multiple ecosystems. These impacts can result in the
decline
of plants and
animals
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animal
species
in the affected area. In order to protect
this
planet as well as all of its
inhabitants it
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inhabitants, it
is critical to ensure that the necessary actions are taken to
firstly
mitigate the risk of a
species
going into in
decline
and
secondly
to help revitalise those
species
that are in
decline
. The effort in preventing the extinction of a
species
is little whereas the impact of the
loss
of a single organism within an ecosystem can have far reaching effects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • genetic diversity
  • food chains
  • climate change
  • habitat destruction
  • pollution
  • overpopulation
  • deforestation
  • water scarcity
  • holistic approach
  • environmental sustainability
  • irreversible loss
  • threatened species
  • conservation efforts
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