Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to protect the environment?

From the invention of modern science, scientists have been warning that we have to protect our
environment
,
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and to do so, we have to reduce the amount of
energy
we are using now. But, many of us do not cut
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uses
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limit. the primary reasons for not following what scientists said are
lack
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of
awareness
and the high
cost
of green
energy
. To encourage
people
to reduce the
energy
uses
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limit,
government
have to raise
awareness
and decrease the
cost
of green
energy
. As the
environment
is degrading gradually, many
people
are unable to see the changes in the
environment
. There are many
people
in
this
world who are still illiterate, and even some of the literate
people
are not capable
to foresee
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the upcoming
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disaster.
For
example
, in the USA,
according to
the
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survey by CNN, 30
percent
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of the
people
still do not know about the changes in the
environment
. The
people
who are aware
about
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the issue have another problem, the high
cost
of green
energy
.
For
example
, the price of
the
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solar
panel
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in the USA is so high that most
of
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the
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middle income
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people
cannot buy
it
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them
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. To encourage
people
to cut their uses,
government
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the government
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have to take
initiative
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the initiative
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not only to increase
awareness
but
also
to decrease the
cost
of green
energy
.
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is a great
example
of
this
matter. It is one of the countries
who
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suffer
for
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changes in the
environment
. The
government
of
this
country invest a lot of money to reduce renewable
energy
costs.
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example
, It
build
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lots of wind turbines to produce electricity. The result of
this
, the of making electricity is lowest among the European nations.
According to
the Daily
observer
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,
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leading newspaper,it
also
increases
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the
awareness
campaign
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20 times
2019
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than the number of campaigns
was
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in 2018. In conclusion, the elementary reasons
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of
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not cutting the
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uses
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of
energy
are not
able
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apply
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to understand the importance and the high
cost
of green
energy
,
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and to reduce the limits, the
government
have to take action
such
as
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reducing
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to reduce
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reducing
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the costs of producing renewable
energy
and to build
awareness
.

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