Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree?
In the past decade, travelling has become increasingly popular all over the world. Some school of thought believes that, when an individual travels
into
different culture they should habituate to local views and mannerisms. Change preposition
to
This
essay will discuss why one
should always follow the host culture for better
travel experience. Personally, I completely agree with Correct article usage
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this
as this
keep
sightseers safe Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
while
travelling in another country. Some individuals think that,
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one
should always follow the rules of host culture while
on trip
because it shows the sign that they are respecting local customs and traditions. If they follow the same Add an article
the trip
a trip
etiquetts
that locals wear, they respect you back enthusiastically. Correct your spelling
etiquette
etiquettes
For example
, this
can be done by wearing a scarf which is covering
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covers
one
's head, especially in countries like Malaysia, Indonesia
where they show respect to their god. Correct word choice
and Indonesia
Therefore
, in order to have a better experience while
on trip
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a trip
the trip
one
should always repect
and follow local mannerisms. Correct your spelling
respect
While
travelling to foreign countries or living abroad, one
should always constrain their political views to themselves. If they try to impose their opinion on indigenous people which
their views differ from Correct pronoun usage
apply
one
another. In this
scenario, one
should be careful before they express their opinion. For example
, if a sightseer from America praises their leaders in North Korea, things can escalate to higher
level where Add an article
a higher
one
can be fined or sentenced to life imprisonment. Thus
following local beliefs while
on vacation is always an excellent idea. To conclude
, some section of individuals believe that when a person travels abroad they should adapt
local traditions and theories in order to have a safe travel. Personally, I completely agree with Correct your spelling
adopt
this
because it shows, not only how much we respect their practices, but also
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion