The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.
The given bar chart
illustrate
the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Change the verb form
illustrates
Sweden
) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.
Correct word choice
and Sweden
Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart is that divorce rates
increased from 2012 to 2015 in Finland. Conversely
, these rates
decreased from 2012 to 2015 in Sweden.
In detail, nearly two fifth
of people got separated from their loved Change to a plural noun
fifths
one's
in the year 2011 in Finland before decreasing to nearly 33% in 2012. From Change noun form
ones
then
on, these values increased significantly from one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
to nearly 42% in 2014. Following
this
year, these rates
were relatively same
. Correct article usage
the same
On the other hand
, divorce rates
in Sweden followed an
opposite trend where these proportions decreased gradually from almost two quarters in 2012 to just under 40% in 2015.Correct article usage
the
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