Threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the dis advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often believed that nuclear deterrence is maintaining global peace and nuclear
power
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is the source of inexpensive and clean
energy
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. While some people argue that its positive aspects exceed its negative ones, I completely disagree with
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idea and believe that nuclear technology has more drawbacks than benefits.
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of all,
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nuclear
power
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is a great source of
energy
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, it comes with pros and cons. In order to build
energy
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, water is boiled to produce steam which moves the turbines.
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process is called fission, because uranium splits into its atoms, thereby generating
energy
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to carry out the process. Even though, it ultimately results in less greenhouse gas emissions as well as high
energy
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output, it comes with safety hazards for public, and problems
in
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with
the destruction of used uranium.
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, Chernobyl still remains the biggest incident that took place due to nuclear
power
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plant. Despite not many casualties, it reminded us of potential threats
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nuclear material
possess
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possesses
.
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, the end expense is quite high, because the end product cannot be littered away because it is highly dangerous. Big storage cans are built to get rid of
uranium which
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uranium, which
costs a lot of money as well as become a threat
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to
nearby population.
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, absence or presence of nuclear weapons
do not prevent
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does not prevent
wars.
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, nuclear countries consider
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an
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an orientation that characterizes the thinking of a group or nation
ideology
, nuclear deterrence is a myth.
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, there have been a large gap between the
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and
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world ward, which not necessarily explains the influence of nuclear technology.
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is exemplified by the current conflicts between Iran and USA. Countries go
for
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to
forward
or away from war simply considering their own interests, not because of the fear of the opponent's
power
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. In conclusion
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,
even though nuclear
power
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is a great source of
energy
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, it is not entirely innocent and comes with the risk of destruction of
masses
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the masses
.
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, wars erupt in world irrelevant to possessing nuclear weapons. In my opinion, the disadvantages of nuclear technology outbalance the advantages.
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