Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Any

library

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that is

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accessible for

general public

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the general public

and is usually funded from public sources like taxes is known as

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a public library

the public library

public libraries

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. In my opinion, public libraries have certainly lost some of their importance;

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this

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does not mean that they are no longer needed. (45) We had seen in the past that people always spend some time in the public libraries on

daily basis

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a daily basis

. Public libraries were considered a symbol of literate and educated population. In short, public libraries were

the great

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the greatest

source of reliable knowledge in the past. (44) Presently, the public libraries are available in almost all the parts of the world. Nowadays, people of any age like to get

public

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a public library membership

library

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membership in order to access

wide range

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a wide range

of books, magazines and newspapers free of cost.

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, the public libraries are not only offered all

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kinds

study

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materials but

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materials, but

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provide an excellent environment for studies.

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, the invention of computer and internet has certainly reduced the number of public

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users. It is now possible for people to

study

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books of their own choice and read newspapers over the internet

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of moving towards public libraries. (104) The recent development in Science and Information technology has enabled the people to

study

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any material over the internet.

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, if the people keep on preferring online

study

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then

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the public libraries will surely

lost

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lose

their importance in the near future. (41)

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, in my opinion,

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the public libraries have lost some of their importance,

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, they are still needed because they have old books and manuscripts that are not available online. (31)

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