When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn. In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job?

As the
popullation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
populations
of the world reaches a staggering 7-billion, unemployment has become quite ubiquitous - especially in developing and
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
couontries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
. For
jobseekers
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job seekers
, in their utter
despiration
a state in which all hope is lost or absent
desperation
the only factor
that is
in consideration to select a
job
is the amount they get paid at the end of the week.
However
, I strongly disagree with
this
philosophy
espouced
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
espoused
by the masses and would express my opinion on what actually matters the most while accepting a
job
offer. Getting a
job
offer is actually quite
difficult but
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difficult, but
this
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
does not mean one should be coerced
in
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into
accepting any demeaning
job
thrown at them. As per the statistics of the Indian governmental agencies, graduates in the field
of
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Of
medicine are willing to work long-lasting unhealthy working hours so as to get the extra overtime income. The
consequency
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
consequences
of
such
practice is
detremental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
for
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to
their patients; as the doctor is in fatigue and is unable to diagnose
properly
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Properly
;
evetually
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
being a health risk
for
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to
his patients. In the field of construction the
situaltion
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
is exponentially worse. Greedy contractors hire workers from
poor nation
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poor nations
and make them work in harsh winters as well as summers; contrary to the international
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
law. In the promise of getting paid slightly more than their
competators
the contestant you hope to defeat
competitors
.
As a result
of which works in the long run suffer
form
a giver or sender
from
acute respiratory infection, and kidney related diseases.
these
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These
are all on account of working through dust storms and dehydration.
Eventually after
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Eventually, after
a few brief years the worker is unfit for work and is scraped as though he is a used car. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate my point that proper health care, sufficient amount of off-days and a non-hostile working environment
are
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is
as much important for a
job
seeker as is high salary.
Moreover
, it is incumbent on the
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
office of the government to properly regulate laws pertaining to
labor
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Labour
Labor
rights and raise minimum wage to match global inflation.

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