The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The diagram illustrates the figure of

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who explore the Britain tourist

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in 1999. It clearly shows 4 areas (

Theme

Parks

, Wildlife

Parks

, Historic Houses, Museums and Galleries) where people visit the most. The small table

further

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about

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on

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the percentage of people who explored

Theme

Parks

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serene sides. In 1999, tourist around the world visits Britain to see the mesmerizing places of that country.

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large amount of them

visit

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Theme

Park. The least visited area of

Britian

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Britain

is Wildlife

Parks

. The

ration

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ratio

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of people

visited

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who visited

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Historic Houses is

also

quite low. Most of them would like to go

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to either

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Theme

Parks

or Museums & Galleries. The vast majority visits

Theme

Park in the year 1999.

From

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100% of

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masses

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38% visited these

parks

. They

further

discuss from the above mention percentage around half went to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. The rest of them visits Alton Towers, Pleasureland, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland. Among

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the most visited places

is

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Alton Towers and the least visited places are Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland.