Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extend do you agree?
With the commencement of digital media, famous personalities and news around them goes hand in hand.
Majority
of people believe that, children are being affected by these celebrity coverage. I support Suggestion
The majority
this
idea to a major extend for some reasons. Linking Words
This
essay will argue my position with reasons and examples.
The prominent issue which can be created due to Linking Words
such
news is young people can be fascinated towards Linking Words
celebrities
lives. Since the news reporters emphasis more on the price rather than any positive aspect, Suggestion
celebrities'
this
creates curiosity in children. Linking Words
For instance
, recently it was highlighted in Linking Words
news
about the expensive dress the actress Kiara Advani had Suggestion
the news
woren
. The cost of the dress being 30 thousand was affected by wear; damaged by long use
worn
picturized
in to picture, represent in a picture
picturised
such
a way that adolescents would be attracted towards it. Linking Words
Therefore
, the news influence the children with a negative aspect.
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Moreover
, with Linking Words
such
fascination developed in kids it could lead to increase in their demands. Teenagers being the most Linking Words
vunerable
they are easily pulled towards the representation which results susceptible to attack
vulnerable
to
high demands. Recent Suggestion
in
experiment
conducted by AIIMS, India supports Suggestion
experiments
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this hypotheses
as there is an increase of 8% in children’s demand if they are in influence of media coverage Suggestion
this hypothesis
these hypotheses
on
celebrities.
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On the contrary
, there are some celebrities whose Linking Words
life
stories could inspire and help children to achieve higher in their Use synonyms
life
. A good example for Use synonyms
this
is our P.M., Narendra Modi. His Linking Words
life
has been a roller coaster where his initial occupation was to sell tea and presently he serves our nation. Use synonyms
Such
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life
changing events could be presented by the news which might Use synonyms
enlighted
children and strive them to pursue higher.
To sum up, it can be having knowledge and spiritual insight
enlightened
finally
commented that, media is an inevitable part of Linking Words
celebrities lives
which has some pros and cons affecting young people around them. Suggestion
a celebrity's life
celebrities life
the celebrity's life
celebrity's life
celebrity's lives
celebrities' lives
This
could increase curiosity within them and Linking Words
further
affect their choices for materialistic things. Linking Words
However
, some Linking Words
personalities
lives can inspire young kids. Suggestion
personality
Thus
, the Government should incorporate some law to monitor the content of news channels.Linking Words
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