Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

Nowadays, it is believed by
significant number
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a significant number
of human beings that it is good to educate boys and girls in separate Institute because they will give more concentration and interest in their studies and stay away from other activities.
On the other hand
, others think that boys and girls will get more benefits if they will
study
in mixed schools. According to me, because by
this
effort, there
confidence
will build up and they will learn more good things from their classmates. According to the current scenario, almost in every country, there are plethora of Educational Institutes
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
a lot of boys and girls get
education
Suggestion
an education
. Currently, there are more disadvantages of co-
education
.
Firstly
, if boys and girls are
study
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studying
in same
classes
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classes, then
then
slowly and gradually their interest in their studies will remove and they will involve in other different activities
such
as dating each other.
For example
, in Russia, it had been seen by
plethora
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a plethora
the plethora
of individuals that many youngsters are they dating each other and they stay away from their
education
.
Therefore
, according to my opinion, the main motive of every academy and Educational Institute should be that to give more attention to their students and try to involve them in their studies.
Furthermore
,
co
education of men and women in the same institutions
coeducation
education
is very popular in every state. In many academies, boys and girls
study
together and attending classes together. Through
this
efforts
Suggestion
effort
, they get a lot of benefits because due to
study
together their
confidence
will
buildup
Suggestion
build up
and they will be able to face other students and they will learn many good things from their classmates which will help them in their lives. In
past
Suggestion
the past
, boys and girls had separate schools and they did
study
separately. Due to
this
, there was low
confidence and
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confidence, and
boys and girls and they were shy too.
Hence
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe, it is good for students to get
education
together
by
Suggestion
with
this
, their
confidence
will improve and they will learn a lot of good things related to their
education
. In conclusion, according to my experience,
co
education of men and women in the same institutions
coeducation
education
is good for students. Boys and girls will become more confident and will be more
active but
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active, but
it is important for every educational Institutes and academies to give more attention to the students and try to make them focus
in
Suggestion
on
their studies.
This
will good for prosper society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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