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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There has been a recent debate that modern buildings should follow the style of ancient houses in the villages. While some people think that old building styles should be imitated, other persons, including me think that individuals should be allowed to build houses to their taste. The rationale for each view will be discussed below. People think that
old ways
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the old ways
 of constructing houses should be adopted for some reasons. One of
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 reasons is because they believe that
such
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 constructions are very homely and
reasons
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Reasons
 to copy old houses
because
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Because
 the rooms are more homely.
they
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They
 do not want uniformity in the local areas.
re
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They
asons people own their resources and should be free to use it the way they like to; they can tailor it to fit their needs

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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