Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Health is an important thing for a human being.There is a proverb,"Health is wealth." A healthy
person
can lead a cheerful
life
.
On the other hand
an unhealthy
person
lead
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leads
a miserable
life
.So we should follow up a
diet
plan
for
make
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making
our
life
healthy and joyful. From the passage I can see some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and
diet
.I agree with their opinion because every
person
is different.Every
person
has
different lifestyle
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a different lifestyle
different lifestyles
and different food habit.So it is impossible to follow up or maintain a same
diet
plan
or same food habit for everybody. So we should make a healthy
diet
plan
and
also
maintain it properly individually.
On the other
hand in
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hand, in
the passage others believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy
diet
.I cannot agree with
this
opinion completely
.
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.
I think it is not possible to take care all of the citizens by the government because of the different lifestyle of them.Government can produce more fresh vegetables
,
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,
fresh fruits
,
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,
fish
,
Accept space
,
meat
,
Accept space
,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
. And Government can increase the awareness among the pupil about
healthy
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a healthy diet plan
diet
plan
for their healthy
life
.
Last
of all we can see that we have to be more concern about our
heathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
diet
plan
because of our healthy
life
. We should maintain a good
diet
plan
individually cause only
govrnment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
cannot change ourselves if we don't aware about us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health-conscious decisions
  • self-discipline
  • informed choices
  • personal accountability
  • regulating food industries
  • implementing policies
  • healthy eating
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies for healthy food
  • enabling environment
  • accessible
  • affordable
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