Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, most of the companies have a rule like, the workers must wear the proper dress to look like smart, but, other people say that uniform is not important in their job. Both of them have some advantages
such
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as if people are wearing proper suits in their jobs, it can develop people's condition and if people have a high quality of
work
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or very fast in making a product, clothes are not a problem to them. What is your opinion? Many managers prefer a person who is putting on clean clothes to look professional, because, clothes have the ability to make managers think a worker is smart and efficient.
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, when a person will enter in a company
then
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his clothes are dirty, the people will think he is careless.
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why we have to put nice dresses in public places and inside companies.
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, usually, proper dress codes are uncomfortable to them when they do their jobs, so, those things can decrease their
work
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qualities.
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, Others prefer the
laborers
someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourers
who are efficient in their place. Earning money follows the people who
work
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hard and more efficient, so,
uniform
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a uniform
is not important to them.
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, there is a person who can
work
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like 10 people,
however
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, when he
dress
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dresses
up, he
can not
can not
cannot
do his job properly.
As a result
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of that uniform, he's working speed will become normal. In
this
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case, the clothes are not very important. In conclusion, most people think that the clothes are very important. Yet,
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not true.
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, the uniforms make us uncomfortable, inefficient and can complicate our working performance. In my opinion, the managers should make a convenient working environment and hire efficient members.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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