Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?

In Today's generation

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is the

mojor

of greater importance or stature or rank

major

Major

problems among working

proffesionals

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professionals

and youths.

working

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Working

proffesional

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professionals

professional

professionally

will be having more

money

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but less

time

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to spend, but in

case

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the case

of youth it is vice-versa,

that is

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having less

money

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but more

time

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.

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will be

stating

a turn to be a starter (in a game at the beginning)

starting

both the views coming paragraphs. In case of working professionals they don't have enough

time

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to spend because

fo

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

there

of them or themselves

their

work pressure, daily routine.

if

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If

they are located in

metropalitan

relating to or characteristic of a metropolis

metropolitan

city means they have

huge struggle

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huge struggles

a huge struggle

in reaching

office

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the office

because of traffic

,

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,

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kills

major

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a majority

majority

the majority

of

there

of them or themselves

their

time

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people

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People

nowadays are not

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

entrusted

to

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in

moving out of home

in

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at

weekends they rather

perfer

like better; value more highly

prefer

to stay

indoor

within a building

indoors

. But in

case

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the case

of youth

,

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,

they have plenty of

time

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apart from studies they are very

enuthuastic

having or showing great excitement and interest

enthusiastic

,

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,

very bold in

appoarch

move towards

approach

.

but

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But

they

will be not having

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won't have

will not have

money

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,

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,

because some youths are shy to ask

partents

a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian

parents

for

money

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and part

time

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jobs are widely available in

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

.

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this

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This

would be a problem because they can't earn while

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

. I would likely to suggest the

govenment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

to implement a scheme which provides part

time

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jobs

to

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for

youth, while they are

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

.

and

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And

for working

proffesionals

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professionals

, they need to make 4 day working week, which would result in better work life as well as social life.