Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?
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this
is the mojor
problems among working of greater importance or stature or rank
major
Major
proffesionals
and youths.engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
working
Suggestion
Working
proffesional
will be having more engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
professional
professionally
money
but less time
to spend, but in case
of youth it is vice-versa, Suggestion
the case
that is
having less money
but more time
. i
will be refers to the speaker or writer
I
stating
both the views coming paragraphs.
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starting
time
to spend because fo
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of
there
work pressure, daily routine. of them or themselves
their
if
they are located in Suggestion
If
metropalitan
city means they have relating to or characteristic of a metropolis
metropolitan
huge struggle
in reaching Suggestion
huge struggles
a huge struggle
office
because of trafficSuggestion
the office
,
Accept space
,
this
kills major
of Suggestion
a majority
majority
the majority
there
of them or themselves
their
time
. people
nowadays are not Suggestion
People
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
to
moving out of home Suggestion
in
in
weekends they rather Suggestion
at
perfer
to stay like better; value more highly
prefer
indoor
.
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indoors
case
of youthSuggestion
the case
,
they have plenty of Accept space
,
time
apart from studies they are very enuthuastic
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enthusiastic
,
very bold in Accept space
,
appoarch
. move towards
approach
but
they Suggestion
But
will be not having
Suggestion
won't have
will not have
money
,
because some youths are shy to ask Accept space
,
partents
for a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
money
and part time
jobs are widely available in india
. a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
this
would be a problem because they can't earn while Suggestion
This
studing
.
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studying
govenment
to implement a scheme which provides part the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
time
jobs to
youth, while they are Suggestion
for
studing
. reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
and
for working Suggestion
And
proffesionals
, they need to make 4 day working week, which would result in better work life as well as social life.engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
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