A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why they would be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

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Dear sir/Madam, I am really happy to know that an international day is going to be observed in the college. As a matter of fact, it could have been awesome if you allow me to deliver a speech regarding

greatness

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of the day, concurrent I could explain

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the martyrs to whom our nation will remain grateful. I strongly believe that my speech can generate

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awareness about the value of the national day and it can guide them towards a new horizon as well. I hope and pray that you would be kind enough to allow me about 20 minutes to talk in front of the pupils when all of them will be assembled in the hall room. A

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or microphone will help a lot to increase my voice to reach out to the apprentices. Appreciate your kind reply with approval. Thanking you in anticipation.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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5 paragraphs

148 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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