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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes?

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Throughout the world, the ratio of criminal activities has increased significantly.
This
 essay will cover
different reasons
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the different reasons
 for
such
 increase and it will
also
 discuss ways of dealing with
such
 offences.
Firstly
, there are several causes of crime those take place in our
society
 nowadays. It is observed, lack of
law
 and order creates a
society
, where people intend to commit a crime because they know that the
law
 is followed properly. Apart from
this
, in countries where
Government
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the Government
 has failed to provide basic necessities of
life
 to its public, people start to rob banks and wealthier members of
society
 as they have become deprived of food, shelter and clothing.
Moreover
, crimes are
also
 done by drugs addicted individuals for
sake
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the sake
 of having
adventure
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adventures
 in
life
. Due to
drugs
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a drugs
 overdose, they become psycho-patient and their mind inclines them to commit crimes.
Although
, there are several ways by which crimes can be controlled. Government must enforce
law
 and order throughout the country.
Additionally
, it must create a system which can monitor performance of individuals throughout different
forces
the front of the human head from the forehead to the chin and ear to ear
faces
 so officers will not be able to misuse their powers and will
also
 not be able to accept
bribe
Suggestion
bribes
. Apart from that, Government should help to provide livelihood to those who are living
life
 below
poverty line
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the poverty line
.
As a result
 of
this
, they will not commit crimes to get money for living
life
. To conclude,
this
 essay has covered number of reasons, those lead to
increasing
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increased
 illegal activities in
society namely
Accept comma addition
society, namely
 lack of
law
 abiding, unavailability of livelihood and drug overdose.
However
,
this
 has covered some ways through which unlawful activities could be reduced
such
 as enforcement of
law
, providing basic necessities and removing corruption and bribe from
society
.

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