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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

#universities #offer #courses #internet #people #study #development
In modern times
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the trend of distant Internet courses has become highly topical.In my opinion
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this
 is a positive development which can engender a waste of time and money. On of the benefits of the taking online
course
 is that it can lead a waste of time.Because of if learners start an online
course
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he or she can study in a very flexible way. They no longer need to wait for buses or move into the
congestion
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congested
 traffic to reach their school in time. Especially, even disabled people who have unfortunate capacities
also
 can join the
course
 wherever and whenever they want by taking advantage of the internet. Another advantage is that saving money. Doing
this
 can open access to anybody who is willing to study regardless of age, location, ability and financial background.
For example
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the cost of courses can be very high and most people afford to pay that
course
.
Furthermore
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people spend money on public transport.
As a result
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they will save expenses. In conclusion,
although
 I consider that enrolling in studying online courses has some inevitable drawbacks, I believe that it's overall positives are far more to society.
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  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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