Whether boys and girls should attend separate schools is a controversial issue. Some people believe that it brings many benefits. However, others believe that it is not good for the future of our children. I agree with those people who think that children should attend the same schools. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my opinion.

The diagram illustrates the way how to make the bricks for the building industry. There are 7 main processes and specific days how long it takes to make those things. Overall, the bricks are combined with clay, sand and water, so, they are going to mix and heat them.

First

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of all, workers dig the clays with the digger. And

then

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, put clays on the metal grid to extract only them. Those are

became

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becoming

small by metal grid and move to combine with sand and water. After that point, there are two methods to make

rectangle appearance

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a rectangular appearance

rectangular appearance

which is familiar to us: use wire cutter or put

mixture

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the mixture

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

mould

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the mould

a mould

moulds

.

Next

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, dry the mixture in the drying oven for 24 to 48. After

this

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step, kiln them in moderate temperature between 200`C~400`C in a brick kiln. Heat again them in high temperature between 870`C~1300`C and put them in cooling chamber for 2 to 3days. From that point, pack the bricks properly, so that it will not break down with each other and the bricks will be delivered to building industry company by drivers.