Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to Science and Technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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The

education

that one earns from a

university

in any particular subject is called higher

education

. In my opinion, students should be free in selecting courses for higher studies,

however

, universities should clearly define the pros and cons of each course in order to facilitate students. (46) We had seen in the past that people had fewer courses to

study

at a

university

level. It was not essential for students to

study

popular courses like those related to science and technology.

Thus

, students had f

reedom

Suggestion

the freedom

to choose whatever course they want to

study

university

levels. (49) Presently, all the universities are offering a wide range of courses in the fields like science, technology, business administration and telecommunication. Nowadays, students are informed about the new

study

options through

education

expos and

career

ounseling

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

counselling

seminars.

However

, it is the duty of students to decide which course is suitable for them keeping in view their future goals.

For example

, it is compulsory for students to earn a higher

education

in the field of Science and Technology who want to start their professional

career

as scientist or engineers. Whereas,

this

condition seems irrelevant for those students who wants to start a business

career

or jobs that do not require a qualification in any particular subject. (115) The recent development in job industry has forced the students to

study

professional courses in order to avail better job opportunities.

Thus

, if the students keep on adapting right courses,

then

our new generation will surely fly high in their professional

career

. (42)

Thus

, in my opinion, students must be given complete freedom in selecting courses for higher

education

university

levels that exactly matched their future goals. (25)

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