Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to Science and Technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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The
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that one earns from a
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in any particular subject is called higher
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. In my opinion, students should be free in selecting courses for higher studies,
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, universities should clearly define the pros and cons of each course in order to facilitate students. (46) We had seen in the past that people had fewer courses to
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at a
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level. It was not essential for students to
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popular courses like those related to science and technology.
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, students had f
reedom
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to choose whatever course they want to
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at
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levels. (49) Presently, all the universities are offering a wide range of courses in the fields like science, technology, business administration and telecommunication. Nowadays, students are informed about the new
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options through
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expos and
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c
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something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
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seminars.
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, it is the duty of students to decide which course is suitable for them keeping in view their future goals.
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, it is compulsory for students to earn a higher
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in the field of Science and Technology who want to start their professional
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as scientist or engineers. Whereas,
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condition seems irrelevant for those students who wants to start a business
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or jobs that do not require a qualification in any particular subject. (115) The recent development in job industry has forced the students to
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professional courses in order to avail better job opportunities.
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, if the students keep on adapting right courses,
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our new generation will surely fly high in their professional
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. (42)
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, in my opinion, students must be given complete freedom in selecting courses for higher
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at
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levels that exactly matched their future goals. (25)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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