Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?

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These days, human are being progressively replaced by artificial intelligent robots in
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the workshop
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Although
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it is possible that all the physical, unskilled works will
required
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require
machine
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machining
, it is impossible to perform
work
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that deals with
precise
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precisely
skilled and human feelings.
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will demonstrates
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will demonstrate
only minor
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will be
perform
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performed
by
human being
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human beings
a human being
. Eventually, all the works that
does not need
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do not need
any specific
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
only require labour will be mechanized by the robots. Many factories and companies believed that if those menial jobs are
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having finished or arrived at completion
done
by
automatic machine
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the automatic machine
, it could save both time and money rather than spending upon hiring, training and employing human. In restaurants in
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a small landlocked Asian country high in the Himalayas between India and China
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,
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,
for instance
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, many
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waiters
and cashier have
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
replaced by artificial machines that consume less money.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, those artificial robots can
work
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all day and night without any rest and salary
,
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,
so that human labour will be changed with robotic intelligence, if only it doesn't need any sort of skilled to perform
work
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.
On the contrary
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, there are certain jobs that
can not
can not
cannot
be replaced by robots because
manmade
not of natural origin; prepared or made artificially
man-made
robots can never reach
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into
real human's brain
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the real human's brain
.In
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a simple way
, to do
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as doctor, medicines and social
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,
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,
ones must have both skilled and emotions, which is
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absent
in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by skilled human
,
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,
it cannot be satisfied.
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robots will never be able to achieve those skills of
human
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humanity
which are exist in human's brain. Highly sophisticated
,
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,
complex works will always need human skills,
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unskilled will eventually completed by robots. For these
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reasons
only few
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work will
be available for human in today's world. It is most likely that
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the machine
will continued
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will continue
its employment by replacing human in most of
works
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the works
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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