Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people form using their cars?

Commuting every day from home to work and
then
to home again is part of our daily routine. The increasing production of cars during the
last
thirty years along with the general policy of decreasing in the
market their
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market, their
price, has boosted the purchase of vehicles.
However
, something which can be good for companies could result bad for us. Even though
this
explosion securely represent and amazing raise in
companies
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company
profits, the impact of
such
increment
not is
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isn't being
only possible to be seen in our
environment but
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environment, but
also
in other undesirable
consecuences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
: congestion, smock, traffic accidents, noise pollution and stress. Measures should have been taken in proper time to control
this
one world big traffic jam. Even so, it is the point of view of many people that we still have time to do something about
this
problem. And governments should start taking
actions
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action
. The improvement
on
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of
in
all different
type
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types
of public services by developing better schemes and timetables, at lower prices would be a factor which could promote the use of these transport systems against the use of cars. It is well known that in some countries the entrance to certain sectors of the downtown in
the biggest
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the big
cities is restricted and regulated by different norms.
Moreover
, the use of a system of public bikes is nowadays something normal in many overpopulated places. Perhaps, these measures should be triggered around all over the world. Anyway, none of these ideas could ever result effective, in a long run, without the development of a campaign oriented to inform and aware people about the significance of
this
problem. To sum up, in order to persuade people to stop using their cars in favor of other transport systems more environmental friendly, governments should start implementing systems as better public transport and an appropriate consciousness campaign
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