The most important thing about a job is how much money you earn in that job. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
people
choose high paying
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high-paying
jobs
. Others prefer jobs
they find satisfying even if the salary is low. While
I admit that it is important to earn enough to make a living, in my opinion, job
satisfaction is more important than the size of the pay package. Job
satisfaction increases productivity. If people
like their jobs
, no one has to force them to go to work. No one has to supervise them. They will perform their job
on their own and with utmost interest and concentration. This
interest that they show will automatically improve the results and help them achieve more in less time. By contrast
, people
who choose a particular job
just because it is paying
well will find it rather difficult to stay motivated. They have to push themselves to work every morning. Because of Wrong verb form
pays
this
lack of interest in the job
, they make more errors and take longer to finish tasks. As a result
, they have to stay late at the office. The long working hours will eventually affect their health and family life. Take, for instance
, the case of IT professionals. The IT industry pays well, but the jobs
are extremely stressful and demanding. Someone who chooses a job
in this
industry just because the salaries are good will eventually burn out unable to cope with the pressures of the job
. On the flip side, rewarding jobs
may not always pay well at the beginning. But over time, the workers' enthusiasm and dedication will make the job
a lucrative career option. For example
, there are lots of people
who turned their hobbies into successful career options. It was their love for the job
that ultimately helped them. To conclude
, job
satisfaction is certainly more important than the money earned. If people
love their job
, eventually, they will Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
also
earn well.Submitted by bhardwaj.kapil88 on
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