International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Of late, the trend of visiting new geographical areas has been immensely popular amongst Tourists. It has changed the dynamics of world substantially. Many believe it to be favourable, for the localities as it brought many advantages, while others found it to be harmful
for
Suggestion
to
their
cultutre
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
cultures
. I would argue for the benefits, it brought.
To Begin
with, Tourists leave behind the traces of their marks. As, they
explores
Suggestion
explore
more of newer places and its cultural heritages, the chances are that, religious beliefs get impacted. Locals do not feel
pleasant
Suggestion
pleased
about
this
change.
For instance
, in India, when foreigners visit the Sikh Temples, they don't cover their head very often, which is a mandatory ritual to follow.
As a result
, few
locals
Suggestion
local
children tend to mock the same.
Nevertheless
, many irresponsible tourists
do not be
Suggestion
have not been
very cautious about the cleanliness of those places, they roam around. They do spread the garbage sometimes, out of their ignorance.
However
,
this
paradigm shift is beneficial to bring more diversities. When tourists roam around the different regions and inspired by their traditions, sometimes, they take it back it to their home countries. To illustrate, Holi, a
colour
Suggestion
colourful
festival of India, is being celebrated in many countries across the globe.
Moreover
, one country's local religion has found a space to flourish. During the visits, travellers, who explore and understand the other religions, get inspired too. As it gains popularity, many secular countries
,
Accept space
,
in need of skilled manpower, comes forward and provide them the required space to flourish.
For example
, in Canada, there are many
Hindu
Suggestion
Hindus
and Sikh temples,
being established
Suggestion
been established
by
Canadian government
Suggestion
the Canadian government
so that Indians do not feel isolated home away. In conclusion,
this
trend has contributed a lot, in
expansion
Suggestion
the expansion
of the local cultural heritage to a much larger scale, by enthusiastic globe trotters' great intentions and eventually transforming the world
,
Accept space
,
as a small global village.
Submitted by rishi.hari786 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: