Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

AUTOMOBILE HAS BECOME VITAL REQUIREMENT IN EVERYONE'S DAILY LIFE.

HOWEVER

, THE VEHICLES MIGHT CAUSE SOME SERIOUS ISSUES TO THE ENVIRONMENT AND LIVING ANIMAL ESPECIALLY CARS.

FIRSTLY

THIS

ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHAT ARE THE MAJOR MENACE IT MAY CREATE AND

SECONDLY

, HOW CAN WE TACKLE THOSE PROBLEMS WITH THE INDIVIDUAL AND GOVERNMENT SUPPORT. ON THE ONE SIDE, THE CAR CREATE A HEALTH ISSUES MOSTLY FOR THE YOUNGER PEOPLE WHERE THEY HAVE THEIR ENTIRE LIVELIHOOD TO LIVE. IF THEY GET FTINESS PROBLEM SINCE THEIR ADULTHOOD

THEN

THYE WOULD SUFFER A LOT LATER IN LIVELIHOOD.

AS A RESULT

, SOME PROBLEM THEY GENETICALLY TRANSFER IN THEIR OFFSPRING.

THIS

TREND WOULD CONTINUE TO

FURTHER

GENERATION.

FOR EXAMPLE

, HEALTH DEPARTMNT OF THE INDIA DID A SURVEY

LAST

YEAR AND REVEALED THAT 60% OF THE OLDER GENERATION HAS SOME KIND OF FOTNESS ISSUES DUE TO THE CAR DRIVING AND THEIR GRAND DON ORDAUGHTER

ALSO

HAS THAT ISSUES. NONTHELESS, CAR OFFERS A MORE ADVANTAGES TO THE HUMAN AND MADE THE HUMAN LIFE MKRE EFFORTLESS THAN EVER. ON THE OTHER SIDE, BEST WAY TO SOLVE

THIS

ISSUE IS TO BRING AN AWARNESS IN THE PUBLIC BY SOME CAMPIAN OR ORGANISING THE AWARNESS PROGRAM.

THIS

WOULD DECLINE THE HERIDETIORY DESIASE TRANSFORMATION TO THE FUTURE GENERATION.

THUS

, THE TOMORROW'S YOUTH WOULD BE FIT AND FINE TO LIVE THIER LIVELIHOOD AND CONTRIBUTE THIER PRECIOUS TIME FOR THE SOCIETY'S GOODWILL.

FOR INSTANCE

, THE CANADIAN HEALTH CENTER'S DATA SHOWN THAT THEY HAVE 60% LESS REPORTED MEDICAL ISSUES BECAUSE OF THE VEHICLE DRIVING IN COMPARISON TO OTHER DEVELOPED COUNTRY. CONSEQUENSLTY, CANADIAN CIVILIAN ARE MORE INFORMED ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF DRIVING MOIRE FREQUENTLY. IN CONCLUSION, VEHICLE INDEED A MAJOR NEEDED THING TO LIVE DAILY LIFE STRESS FREE FOR HE HUMAN.

NEVERTHELESS

, AS PER THE NATURE'S LAW. EVERYTHING HAS GOOD AND BAD SIDE, IN THE WAY VEHICLE

ALSO

HAS NEGATIVE EFFECT ON THE HUMAN BODY. BUT, THEY USE AS PER THE REQUIREMENT THAN THEY COULD PREVENT THE

SUCH

DISEASES FOR THEM AND FOR THEIR CHIOLDREN AS WELL.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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14Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Over-reliance
Emissions
Global warming
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Affordability
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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