The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given table describes information about the proportion of the student getting high marks in various aspects of a university during a period of five years starting from 2000 to 2010. It can be clearly seen from the table most of the students get great marks in 2010.
According to
what is shown, In 2000 a lot of students were able to get high
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a high
the high
score
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scores
while
most of them get low scores in a range of modules offered subject. In addition
, the average of
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the
score decreased every five years to reach the lowest per cent in 2010 at 27%.
Between 2000 and 2010, the student marks were showing a significant rise in electronic resources at 45% to 88%, respectively. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, In Buildings
/ teaching facilities subject all the students got the same percentage over all the 10 years at 77%.
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the Buildings
To sum up
, we could say that there was an improvement in student grade
in all the subjects in 2010 except in a range of modules offered subject.Fix the agreement mistake
grades
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