Technology allows food to be produced in greater quantities at lower prices. Some people believe this is a positive development, while others feel that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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The advancement of
food
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producing technology has become an issue
disussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
glibally
throughout the world
globally
. Some people opine that the availability of mass produced
food
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with affordable prices has many benefits for
society
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, whilst other
argue
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argues
it actually brings more harm than good.
This
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essay will try to discuss the opposing notions and in the conclusion my opinion on the topic.
To begin
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with, the availability of more
food
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and at lower prices will lead to an increased level of
society
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's purchasing power. Specifically,
this
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will help economically disadvantaged people to support
food
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for themselves. On top of that, the advancement of genetic
engeneering
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
engineering
will
also
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enable people to produce substitute of various rare
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food or
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foods, or
foods or
other innovative
food
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that will be beneficial for
society
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.
In contrast
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, there are some disadvantages that need to be tackled following
this
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process. The use of machine in
food
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factories has and will replace the need of
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
, leading to an increased in the number of
joblee
increase twofold
double
people who could have actually at the blue collar level in
this
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business.
However
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,
this
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could actually be solved with
active role
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the active role
of governments and
society
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to give training and education to these people so they can have even better jobs. As for the genetic
engeneering
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
engineering
, some people are worried about the safety of
food
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produced from
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this mechanisms
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these mechanisms
this mechanism
.
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actually should not be any problems because before the genetically modified
food
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are sold to market, there are several healthy
checksto
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checks to
be tasted. To sum
uo
spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position
up
, while technology has allowed people to purchase more
food
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and tackle
food
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scarcity, some people still worry about its negative effects on employment and
food
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danger.
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, there are some possible strategies to counter all the
afforementioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
negative effects,
thus
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally believe the benefits of
food
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producing technology outnumber its disadvantages.
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