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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Information
Technology
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 has brought revolution in every aspect of our
life
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. From our
day
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 to
day
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life
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 to the working environment, We are completely surrounded by Technologies. Difficulties that were faced by human beings in the previous decades are now addressed by different technologies. The present is an era of revolution where every
day
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 a new
technology
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 or a system is explored and developed which minimizes human efforts as well as the probability of human mistakes. IT has a very positive impact on human
life
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. Before
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 revolutionary era of Information
Technology
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, human beings were obliged to perform every work on their own. It not only consumes a lot of time, but
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 reduces the efficiency of the work done. Human beings have to put up strenuous efforts even to perform a daily routine task.
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, with the growing population of Information
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, human efforts are now reduced. Transportation, laundry, grocery, shopping and every other task
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 related to our daily routine is now simplified by the
technology
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 creating ease for human being. Different Mobile Applications
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 can be used for online shopping or for finding a proper source of transport every
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.
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, Artificial Intelligence and Internet of Things are the two most researched fields of the 21st century. Organizations are now migrating towards automation. Many companies are already delegating numerous mundane task for computers. Machines are trained to behave like and perform like a human being.
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, In Australia, Most of the supermarket owners use robots or any other
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 of counter and cashier. They will save time and human efforts. Information
technology
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 has a very positive impact in every domain of
life
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. But on the flip side of the coin, there are some disadvantages as well. Most human tasks are now automated and are performed by robots and machine which increases unemployment rate. People are now dependent on machines and computers. But clearly the gains of Information
Technology
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 has outweighed the disadvantages.
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