In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places, do you agree or not?

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Nowadays, a lot of people consider smoking as a crime, because the smoker hurts not only himself but
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irritate others. Many countries decided to put end t
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is the role of governments to enact the rules to protect the
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of people. If the smokers have the right to smoke, those who are around them have the right to breath a clean air.
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children's
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indicates the effect of smoking on
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smokers in order to protect others from the bad effects of smoking. By applying
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onsider smoking as a habit and they will consider it as a strange phenomena between us. They will not be lured into lifelong addiction and ill
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organizations
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, request the responsible persons to increase the taxes on tobacco in order to, enforce the smokers to reduce smoking. If the governments enable to change the thought of smokers and convince them tp pr
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To conclude, regulating rules and allocating smoke- free areas is not only a neces
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