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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick?

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Owing to the higher requirements of job, masses go to
work
 under the sense of commitment and stress, even when they are sick and complete their significant tasks.
This
 phenomenon may infect others and can
be cause
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of serious
health
 issues by themselves.
However
, in my opinion mortals must not go to
work
 if they are suffering from any kind of illness, because it may lead to severe consequences.
To begin
 with, people should not go to
work
 if they are ill since it can effects of others
health
.
In other words
, if any
person
 is ill and
work
 with their colleagues and
therefore
 coworkers may be victim of
same sickness
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the same sickness
 as they
work
 around the ill
person
.
For example
, respiratory diseases
such
 as cough and cold can be quickly passed from one
person
 to another. Apart from
this
, sometimes a little disease
can be lead
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can lead
can be led
 to a serious
health
problems
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problem
 if someone not taking proper rest and
work
 continuously without taking any kind of drugs.
In addition
, there are more reasons that why folks should not go to
work
 during their sickness. To be more precise, when any
person
 is ill his or her mind is totally disturbed due to the sickness, they feel
tiredness
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tired
 and they cannot concentrate on
work
 properly.
For example
, if a healthy
person
do
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does
work
 in 30
minutes but
Accept comma addition
minutes, but
 a sick
person
 will take 1 hour for the same
work
.
As a result
, it would be difficult for the ill
person
 to complete the task and meet the all deadlines of their
work
. In conclusion, it is clear from the above discussion that there are many negative impacts if a sick
person
gies
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
goes
 to
work
. These factors may lead to
thier
of them or themselves
their
tire
 serious
health
 problems as well as
thier
of them or themselves
their
 coworkers.
Therefore
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think sick people should not be allowed to do
work
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the work
.
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