The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure describes how the kinetic energy of stored
water
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in a dam is used to run a
turbine
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to produce electric power in a hydroelectric powerhouse. The
water
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obtained from downstream of a river is stored in a high-altitude
reservoir
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of a dam. The
water
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from the intake of the
reservoir
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, which is opened during the daytime, is made to flow through the blades of the
turbine
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. The
turbine
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, which is coupled to an electric generator, is rotated by the impact of
high
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kinetic energy of the fluid. The power generated by the rotation of the armature of the generator is transmitted to the national grid. The
water
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at the discharge of the
turbine
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is stored in a low-altitude
reservoir
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. At night,
he
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the
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surplus amount of electrical energy from the grid station is supplied to the generator, which in
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case operates as a motor, and runs the reversible
turbine
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, which at night, acts as a pump, to deliver the
water
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from
lower
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to
higher
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the higher
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reservoir
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.
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, the level of
water
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in high-level storage is maintained and can be used to run the
turbine
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the
next
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day.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, turbine, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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